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17 Things to delete from your Resume [Effective Immediately]

17 Things to delete from your Resume [Effective Immediately]


Second Headline Analysed for EMV (Emotional Marketing Value)

As outlined by  Ali Anani, Brand Ambassador @beBee 

                                                                         in The One Line Detector 



How did your Headline go  Jana Kefalas  ?

WOW !                                 67.67%     =   68%

The most gifted copywriters have 50%-75%
EMV words in headlines !  THAT'S YOU !


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With the main emotion classified as INTELLECTUAL


WE ALL WOULD HAVE GUESSED THAT !

Your headline carries words that predominantly appeal to most people's intellectual sphere. Intebectual impact words are especially effective when your goal is to arouse curiosity, and when offering products and services that require reasoning or careful evaluation. The majority of words with emotional impact in the English language fall in this Intellectual category. Intellectual impact words ace the most -used of all three categories, and have the broadest appeal to people in general. Intellectual impact words are best used to attune copy and sakes. messages aimed at people and businesses involved in the fields of education, law, medicine, research, politics, and similar fields. While not restricted to these groups, by gving presentations which are weighted with Intellectual impact words, your chents and customers will be more positively influenced and you are more likely to attain a more favorable response.







Your words that have the broadest general appeal
and resonate with most of your readers.

Intellectual words have the strongest potential for influence
when the goal is to arouse curiosity and with products that
require reasoning and evaluation.
 
The influence of Intellectual words is the most positive
and gives a more favourable response in the market sphere. 



And further to above

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I loved this line your buzz Jana Kefalas
"make sure your most critical job search document isn’t partying like it’s 1999"  


It actually made me laugh out loud
(a rare occurrence)


I thought this would be a good alternate headline
but lets see what kind of score it gets from Headline Analyser !

[ETL Your headline words have a predominantly Empathetic appeal. While not as common as words with Intellectual impact, words which resonate in with Empathetic impact often bring out profound and strong positive emotional reactions in people. Copy containing empathetic impact words are best used to attune with people and businesses involved with care-giving. For example, nurses, doctors, and counselors all tend to respond easily and favorably to Empathetic words. Women, and especially mothers, are very strong in their use of Empathatic impact words in the language. While use of Empathetic impact words does not have to be limited to these groups, we've found that by selecting m ore words with Empathetic impact delivers desirable conversion responses from those types of market segments.










How did my Headline go  Jana Kefalas ?
WOW !                                      38.46%     =   39%
Most professional copywriters have  30%-40%
EMV words in headlines ! THAT'S Me !

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My words while not as common as Intellectual words
bring out strong positive emotional reactions in readers.

For women, especially Mothers and readers in caring professions Empathetic words bring out strong positive emotional reactions.

The influence of Empathetic gives a more conversion response
in the market sphere. 

AND SO WHERE DOES THAT LEAVE US ?

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AND YOU WILL WRITE BETTER COPY !




Thank you for participating 

Jana Kefalas

I hope it wasn't too stressful.
            

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Comments

Ali Anani

6 years ago #4

Bravo Louise Smith- You are consistent in your efforts. Your scores here are beautiful. Forward you go

Louise Smith

6 years ago #3

#2
What do you mean by remove it Javier? The whole buzz?

Javier Cámara-Rica 🐝🇪🇸

6 years ago #2

Louise you can remove it. Please feel free to do it

Louise Smith

6 years ago #1

What is stressful for me is that there is no UNDO Button. It's my greatest wish, Bee Fairy to have one. And The text formatting is all over the place even though I corrected it all 3 separate times ??????????????? Please ................. Javier \ud83d\udc1d beBee Juan Imaz Frederico Alvarez San Martin Alberto Anaya Arcas Alberto Anaya Arcas Ana Elisa Llera César Fernandez Juli\u00e1n Campos

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